Tuesday, 10 May 2016

The Easter bunny

Hi have you ever seen the Easter bunny no well you can look at this Easter bunny.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Tyler this is Eddie and I think this is really good but you need more punctuation.

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  2. Hi Tyler I like beuses I like ester egg too next time put some colour in your writing apart from that it is good.

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